| Mar 10, 2010 |
| Puleng Paulinah Monare on »Emotion«: | “wow this is deep” |
| Mar 9, 2010 |
| Sheryleigh on »An Abandoned Bundle«: | “THE POEM DEEPLY TOUCH MY HEART.BECAUSE I SEE SO MANY YOUNG GIRLS GETTING RID OF THEIR BABIES.ITS REALLY KILLING ME!” |
| Mar 8, 2010 |
| Rofhiwa Netshiavha on »To my Beloved«: | “Great piece of work” |
| Bongani Sikhonde on »My journey of pain«: | “wow that away of putting words keep it up hey.” |
| Beaulah Bernice Boois on »Loveproof«: | “Love it...soundz like a rock song I'd listen to over and over again!!!” |
| Mar 5, 2010 |
| Mthandazo Lucky KaDlodlo on »Married but single (lamentations of)«: | “---thanks Hettie, i felt it my spirit ansd i said it for the mamafolks, they are too quiet at times, bering the pain...” |
| Emmanuel on »Dreamz...«: | “This is so lovely Beaulah. Its a beautiful song.” |
| Emmanuel on »Amused...«: | “Simple, but it asks you to think about these things; to turn and look again.” |
| Mar 2, 2010 |
| Nthabiseng Molefe on »Anger«: | “This poem really explains how I often feel. Carry on writing maybe we might be friends.” |
| Happy Mhlongo on »My Fairy Tale«: | “No gal, dnt ruin ur Mooi face, a make-up won't do the job if he loves you he'll notice you even if you're Short witout the Heels or wit you little hair.... love dnt care about all that, nuc one, go gal” |
| Gcinile Mdletshe on »thank you«: | “thank u guys...” |
| Mary Kettle on »shadows«: | “I love your ways with words ” |
| Mar 1, 2010 |
| gift on »An Abandoned Bundle«: | “indeed a deep poem that captures our attention and makes us wonder.....” |
| Happy Mhlongo on »thank you«: | “let me add for u: hank you for being an intergral part of my life nyc poem” |
| Feb 28, 2010 |
| Ashok Kumar Madhunlall on »thank you«: | “Wow, such poignant writing.” |
| Feb 26, 2010 |
| beauty on »Dreamz...«: | “woow! this is soo amaizing dude. felt this one deep in my soul... i can totaly relate to it! one word: beautiful! ” |
| Happy Mhlongo on »She Left The Tap Open«: | “Eish speechles, but its true vele man, no1 can feel a lost true love space.... maybe by change a good plumber will be back to do her duty again but not as good as the real lost one... keep the ryming him, u the best” |
| Happy Mhlongo on »Who am I?«: | “Thanks Kelebs'.....” |
| Gcinile Mdletshe on »She Left The Tap Open«: | “i love yo poem...” |
| Feb 25, 2010 |
| simphiwe on »Without tears!«: | “you touched my heart” |
| Feb 24, 2010 |
| Emmanuel Ekale Esambe on »Home Affairs«: | “Dudu, as a foreigner living in SA, you will be sure that I know some stuff happening in the HA. However, the poem should open up other areas of interpretation if possible.” |
| Feb 23, 2010 |
| Cindy on »The Evil Twin«: | “we all hav an evil twin inside us hidden some where deep and many times it does over power the good in us” |
| Feb 22, 2010 |
| PB on »The Evil Twin«: | “tyt i like...we do have multi personas..but many never notice” |
| Feb 21, 2010 |
| Moemise Motsepe on »City of God«: | “gather around Milazi and bow to the lord of the word...” |
| Feb 19, 2010 |
| Kelly on »Everything Fades«: | “Great work, but I have a question...do you know Renzie & Tina ? if so, please let me know. Mahalo” |
| Feb 13, 2010 |
| mshini on »An Abandoned Bundle«: | “what a wonderful poem,but i just cant deal with the sadness” |
| Feb 12, 2010 |
| Andreas Buchholz on »Words of a mixed race girl«: | “Welcome here. That's a touching piece. You've chosen the words both emotionally and very consciously to create a powerful poem. By the way, I've got two mixed-raced daughters (eurasian).
Andreas” |
| Zitho on »The Nagging Dusk«: | “Really good.” |
| Feb 5, 2010 |
| Ashok Kumar Madhunlall on »Shades«: | “It is amazing, isn't it Mary, that we are given the gift of life lavished by symphony of colour but we chose to be morose and drab? How ironic that those who have this greyness over them - through no choice of their own - desire a burst of colour, a change of life.” |
| Ashok Kumar Madhunlall on »the rose«: | “I really enjoyed this poem, Anil. Keep writing.” |
| Ashok Kumar Madhunlall on »how?«: | “Wow Hettie, you have the ability to take everyday events and make them so profound. It is all about questioning the status quo.” |
| Ashok Kumar Madhunlall on »how?«: | “Wow Hettie, You can take everyday events and make them so very profound.” |
| zitho on »The Mind-Genie«: | “Love this poem.” |
| Zitho on »Heavenly Panorama«: | “love the poem, it brings sense of hope in a world of despair.” |
| Ellie on »The New Leaf«: | “The movement in this poem is lovely, and the title makes me think of forgiveness. ” |
| Ellie on »Untainted«: | “The poem has very strong images and shows a complex aspect of humanity. ” |
| Jan 30, 2010 |
| Ashok Kumar Madhunlall on »Love, My Friends (an English sonnet)«: | “Beautiful writing....keep going.” |
| Jan 29, 2010 |
| Joseph Kadoma on »Love, My Friends (an English sonnet)«: | “This is a very good poem that takes after the likes of Shakespeare and John Milton. Very few writers today are able to come up with such pieces of verse. Dambudzo Marechera did it in 'Cemetery Of Mind'.” |
| Jan 28, 2010 |
| Jayram Daya on »You«: | “Love matures with age. Thought provoking, good” |
| Ashok Kumar Madhunlall on »The Sun Devotee«: | “I am a devout Hindu - and see God in Nature, something that Wordsworth asked us to do in The world is too much with us. Really good.” |
| Jan 25, 2010 |
| Rofhiwa Netshiavha on »A Painting in Discord«: | “Beautiful work of art, im insipired. I hope to be as good as you.” |
| Jan 21, 2010 |
| J 1 on »An Abandoned Bundle«: | “What general impression does the poem give of the living conditions in ''White city Jabuvu''(Line 3)?” |
| Peggy Hartzenberg on »The other woman«: | “I know exactly where you are coming from, you couldn't put it any better than I could have.” |
| Jan 20, 2010 |
| Laura on »The Mind-Genie«: | “And how quickly our faith can be tested:) Your message is beautiful reminder of how important it is to keep ones faith” |
| Laura on »The Evil Twin«: | “Oh I do like this, so michievous. I do believe that we all have a dark side to ourselves and you have put it so well.” |
| Laura on »Healing Dawn«: | “I could feel what you were saying, it gives a feeling of unity, we share the same emotions, in this case, fear and worry, and yet when the New Day dawns,it brings with it a sense of renewal, a fresh start, a new outlook, and possibly solutions and also the message that we are never alone. I loved it, AK:)” |
| Anonymous on »The Beggar«: | “How odd, too deep this soul appears to be, but whom I know too well, a cheater, a man with no compassion in the life he lives and yet his words on paper appear the opposite.” |
| D.Mills on »With Love, I can«: | “Ah, a pure love poem” |
| Adnasis Egnahs on »Woman (Celebrate her)«: | “Raises questions of social double standards.. but also of Man vs Boy and Woman vs Girl.... Your matured decipher and recognition of Woman shows you have reached Manhood...Proud of you and thank you..” |
| Adnasis Egnahs on »Miracle of Silence«: | “The loudest scream in the one that is internal and no one hears... when your face is a one way view shatterproof mirror... But I hear you..” |
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