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Poem "When it's over, let me know":
- written August 2002
- published August 26, 2009
- viewed 41 times

Other poems by Tiema Muindi:
»Beyond The Eyes«
»Dance of my Soul«
»Family Honour«
»I Spoke To Her«
»If only they knew«
»Lifetime Dream«
»Memories Of Yesterday«
»My Song Your Dance«
»My Story«
»No Man Cry«
»Political Menus«
»Shadow of the night«
»Shattered Hopes & Dreams«
»Song Of Death«
»Song Of Man«
»The Journey of Life«
»The Last Journey«
»The Married Bride«
»The River Between«
»The Waiting Game«
»Tribute For Amina Ramadhani«
»Wise Counsel«
»Yesterday's Day's Life«


»When it's over, let me know«

by Tiema Muindi

Would you let me know
When the flame of your emotions
Is burning low
That my relation with you
Is now but just a show?

Would you let me know
When the river of our love
Is drying up
That in your heart
My thirst of love
Cannot be quenched?

Would you let me know
When the lyrics of my love
No longer matches
The drumbeats of our lives
That once had
No boundary between

Would you let me know
When that candlelight
No longer radiates
Rays of love and affection
That both of us
Once cherished
As a bond of love

Would you let me know
When the whistle is blown
And that
It was only a game
As you move on ahead
And on your face
With no trace of shame

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