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Poem "Dance of my Soul":
- written September 2009
- published September 28, 2009
- viewed 63 times

Other poems by Tiema Muindi:
»Beyond The Eyes«
»Family Honour«
»I Spoke To Her«
»If only they knew«
»Lifetime Dream«
»Memories Of Yesterday«
»My Song Your Dance«
»My Story«
»No Man Cry«
»Political Menus«
»Shadow of the night«
»Shattered Hopes & Dreams«
»Song Of Death«
»Song Of Man«
»The Journey of Life«
»The Last Journey«
»The Married Bride«
»The River Between«
»The Waiting Game«
»Tribute For Amina Ramadhani«
»When it's over, let me know«
»Wise Counsel«
»Yesterday's Day's Life«


»Dance of my Soul«

by Tiema Muindi

What I wish for died before
Perhaps not
Or may be
Not of this world
Or shall not be so
What I wish for
My happiness to be

I have tried and failed
Many times before
Choices I made
Turned upside down
Not that my hand made it be
Not that my heart
Loved her not
Perhaps what I wish for
Died before

I have shed tears
Never tricked down my cheek
Tears that spoke now words
I have shed tears
Never wet my chest
Tears that exposed no sorrow
That you could see a grieving soul
But in the being of me
A self burn
A self weeps
Perhaps what I wish for
Died before

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  •  Maureen Direro: "Wow,that was great simple yet into the point with an oomph of what you believed,that i must admit was awesome"
  •  Ashok Kumar Madhunlall: "Poetry - The language of the heart - I can feel your heart beat and rythym."
  •  Christopher Kudyahakudadirwe: "Muindi, this poem is a very good one. It carries all the ingredients of fine verse. However, I think you need to edit it carefully here and there e.g. I think 'A self burn' should read as 'A self burns' and tears 'trickle' down your cheeks."
  •  Christopher Kudyahakudadirwe: "Muindi, this poem is a very good one. It carries all the ingredients of fine verse. However, I think you need to edit it carefully here and there e.g. I think 'A self burn' should read as 'A self burns' and tears 'trickle' down your cheeks."
  •  Hettie Van Zyl: "Outstanding thoughts from a heart.Thanks Tiema"