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Ashok Kumar Madhunlall

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Poem "Tidal Force":
- published November 12, 2009
- viewed 158 times

Other poems by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
»Healing Dawn«
»Heavenly Panorama«
»The Evil Twin«
»The Mind-Genie«
»The Nagging Dusk«
»The New Leaf«
»Untainted«
»Within Without«


»Tidal Force«

by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall

Just before dawn on a lonely shore,
I trudge the sands walked by many before,
The water entices me with her cool glaze,
And I find myself swept back by her – in a daze.
I look around me and all I see is ocean and gloom,
Oh! An overwhelming sense of loss and impending doom.
The darkness evaporates into a light shade of grey,
I am firmly in her clutches I realize in dismay.
I implore the familiar surroundings for me to save.
"Don't abandon me in this watery grave!"
They hear me, but let fate take her course.
For hasn't this scene played before in nature's laws?
So as I get sucked in and my last breath I take,
I ask, "God, why do thee me, your son forsake?"

The waves curl and froth in their unexpected delight,
I am raised by their power and the grey turns to light.
Instead of sinking, I am now riding and towards the light flying;
"Is this what I read as we depart this world dying?"
I escape the waves that have gained gruesome faces,
Some resemble me in my life in different places.

An offering in a chalice awaits me all laid out and ready,
"Why, isn't that what I had prepared long ago already?"

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  •  charles govender : "excellent work !"
  •  Ravi Moopen: "You are a brave man, I love this poem, we all need to be so prepared...go bru you got what it takes."
  •  Sifiso: "MMMM...I wonder where did you get this talent. You are very talented sir I must say. But God our creater is the one who gave you all this. Thanks to share this lovely talent with us."
  •  Julian: "I agree with Meryl Klanfar - different meaning everytime."
  •  Meryl Klanfar: "Reading this poem was an interesting experience. I think one has to read it a couple of times and each time you find something different."
  •  Dube: "Really good poem."
  •  Mervin: "Very profound indeed, almost dreamlike, bordering on the surreal."
  •  Rani: "I really enjoy the use of language and style of writing"
  •  Renolan: "An extremely well thought out and writen poem!!"
  •  Don: "I agree with Jeeven. A very good poem."
  •  Vincent: "We are on this earth by virtue of His grace. A good poem."
  •  khanyo: "We sometimes must submit to the powers of Nature - Good or Bad."
  •  Jeeven: "Excellent stuff! The reader is challenged to interpret the ambiquity.Is it a surrender to life or to death?"
  •  Sheila Nair: "Fantastic that a man can write with such indelible passion.Challenges the convention that men are rational and not emotionally involved in their art."
  •  Leslie Clarke: "Wonderful, fantastic, you should get it published."
  •  roshan: "a feeling of helplessness yet blissful"
  •  Rhoda: "An overwhelming poem that envokes so many emotions within me."
  •  xolile: "Very profound and wonderfully written with beautiful use of imagery, well done!"
  •  Tess: "You captured my imagination"
  •  Eric : "I am honestly blown away ....its a masterpiece"
  •  peter: "interesting n unpredictable."
  •  Tasveer: "a poem that makes my mind wonder........."
  •  Logas: "Vivid yet evoking sad emotions.........."
  •  jalapeno: "interesting"
  •  csm: "Nice"
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  •  Saneshen: "Great poem. You certainly have the reader enticed by visualising each word in text thereby delivering the essence of life and death, present and past. Love it, well done"
  •  Deshnee: "Amazing imagination.... inspiring talent."
  •  Misch: "Wow, you very talented"
  •  joey: "good....."
  •  TP: "Good. you have a lot of time..."
  •  Akshar: "Very wonderful poem"