Ashok Kumar Madhunlall
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Poem "The Evil Twin":
- written November 2009
- published November 18, 2009
- viewed 107 times
Other poems by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
»Healing Dawn«
»Heavenly Panorama«
»The Mind-Genie«
»The Nagging Dusk«
»The New Leaf«
»Tidal Force«
»Untainted«
»Within Without«
Visit Ashok Kumar Madhunlall's profile page
Poem "The Evil Twin":
- written November 2009
- published November 18, 2009
- viewed 107 times
Other poems by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
»Healing Dawn«»Heavenly Panorama«»The Mind-Genie«»The Nagging Dusk«»The New Leaf«»Tidal Force«»Untainted«»Within Without«»The Evil Twin«
New eyes flicker open
Good Morning
Yesterday's eyes forgotten
Prayers said just mechanically
He steps out of himself like a shadowy soul
Duplicity
His eyes dart about wickedly
Slits narrow menacingly knowingly cold
Today he shall not be meek but bold
The halo spins and twirls to remind him
He ignores – the carnal in control
He peeps behind him
Surreptitiously he acts out his desires
Leers behind him again
Gives a lascivious look
Sighs
Steps back into himself again
Good Day
Good Morning
Yesterday's eyes forgotten
Prayers said just mechanically
He steps out of himself like a shadowy soul
Duplicity
His eyes dart about wickedly
Slits narrow menacingly knowingly cold
Today he shall not be meek but bold
The halo spins and twirls to remind him
He ignores – the carnal in control
He peeps behind him
Surreptitiously he acts out his desires
Leers behind him again
Gives a lascivious look
Sighs
Steps back into himself again
Good Day
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Rathnashikamani Bijja: "Great imagery well crafted into this wonderful poem.
Very professional presentation."- Venessa: "The duplicity within, the potential of evil, and the victory of good - a sigh, a choice has been made. The discomfort on reading this poem comes from the knowledge that yes, the potential for evil is there and even that is difficult to admit to. Scary but very poignant."
- kartic bimson 7P: "itz realy moving"
- kartic bimson 7P: "it sucks"
- A JOHN: "This poem makes alot sense. Well done"
- Ravi Moopen: "I did not want to read this one but I am glad I did."
- Sifiso: "Nice ryhthym, excellent work."
- George: "A good poem reflecting the many personalities within us."
- Akshar : "I like this poem as you always say you choose wich twin 2 bring out"
- Cindy: "we all hav an evil twin inside us hidden some where deep and many times it does over power the good in us"
- PB: "tyt i like...we do have multi personas..but many never notice"
- Laura: "Oh I do like this, so michievous. I do believe that we all have a dark side to ourselves and you have put it so well."
- Julian: "I enjoyed reading this poem"
- Dube: "This reminds me of someone I know."
- Mervin: "A lovely poem depicting the different sides in the same person. Keep writing AK."
- AK Madhunalll: "I wrote this poem to show that we all have two or indeed many personalities. It depends upon the situation and is contingent upon our spritual condition as to which persnailty becomes dominant in any paarticular situation."
- Rani: "Good"
- Rina: "A good poem with a very good message. I agree with Rhoda that sometimes the othwer part of us gets to do things."
- Rhoda: "We all have two sides to us. Sometimes the hidden side of us is needed to get the job done."
- roshan: "live your life dont look back."
- Edward: "A simple theme brought out eloquently in your poem."
- Jess: "The quick paced ryhthym of the poem brings out clearly the desire to walk the forbidden road."
- Don: "Yes, we all have another side to us."
- Khanyo: "We all have a mischief side to us. Captured quite well, I might say."