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Ashok Kumar Madhunlall

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Poem "Untainted":
- written November 2009
- published November 19, 2009
- viewed 66 times

Other poems by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
»Healing Dawn«
»Heavenly Panorama«
»The Evil Twin«
»The Mind-Genie«
»The Nagging Dusk«
»The New Leaf«
»Tidal Force«
»Within Without«


»Untainted«

by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall

Their hands are clasped,
Smiling – for the gift of time
Has been granted to them.
She is dressed in a snow white sari,
He in an equally hued kurtha.
Into the temple they gingerly enter
And their daily obeisance
To The Lord offer.
They emerge – still holding hands,
Smiling, greeting, just very happy.
Ethereal, so very blissful.
They enter the street,
Filled with society's rot and decay,
Passing the street urchins and beggars,
Almost stepping into the sewer and effluence
That lies forgotten in the slummy streets.
The village drunk from his heap leers at her,
Admires her swaying and rolling hips,
Sucks his lips and spits out –
As if the decay is not enough.
The flies buzz and circle the rotting fruit
Thrown by the street vendors.
Millions of maggots rise and fall wavelike,
Focused in their endeavour to buzz and fly.
The couple's reflection in a puddle of sewer water,
Smiles back at them, purer than their garb,
Backdropped by the temple,
Untainted, by the filth and rot.
It seems that they are enveloped
By an invisible shield of spirituality.
They glide by – still holding hands
So very happy, heavenly,
Radiating hope...hope...hope...

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  •  Gigi Yenk: "The gift of time you allude to, together with what follows, makes this a almost a photograph. Perfectly capturing that moment in time."
  •  Venessa: "Beautiful poem which shows how love brings hope and isn't overshadowed by the decay around us. Love protects, yes, breeds(gives life to), breathes (lives) and sustains(feeds)hope."
  •  Ravi Moopen: "You painted a picture with this poem. It took back to my days in India...I saw and smelt this."
  •  George: "An almost impossible state of being but with dilligence we can achieve it."
  •  Jaryd: "A beautiful poem with strong imagery and lots of hope...."
  •  Ellie : "The poem has very strong images and shows a complex aspect of humanity."
  •  Dube: "Is it good to be so detached from the reality of life?"
  •  Mervin: "A serene poem depicting that we can remain unaffected by all the rot around us provided that we are spiritually strong."
  •  justin: "a good poem"
  •  Rina: "Almost surreal. Wow!"
  •  Edward: "This poems shows the power of love and faith. The evils of society can be conqured."
  •  Kessie: "A good poem showing purity amidst the rot and decay of society"
  •  Jay: "I like this poem. It has a positive message for us."
  •  Don: "Love can make people oblivious to things around them."
  •  Venny: "WoW... such a profound love that can actually obscure the poison of society?!?!"
  •  Vincent: "Is this state of being possible? Is faith and Spirituality a panacea for society's ills."
  •  Jeff: "LOve and Faith - a great recipe for changing the ot in society."
  •  Khanyo: "We ought to remain untainted by all that is impure around us. A good theme in todays society."