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Poem "The last thing (she said)":
- written October 2004
- published April 9, 2006
- viewed 300 times

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»The last thing (she said)«

by Alieux Casey

She said she won?t take anymore shit
Off one more nigga/
Got herself a pistol
She?s ready to pull the trigger
Will not give another man
A chance/
I took her to a dance
She ran into her ex
Who gave her the best sex.
He used to rock her world
But he was with another girl.
She saw them standing there
And she didn?t even care.
I said, ?don?t bother him.?
She said, ?but I love him.
My heart?s beating so fast.?
And I said, ?but didn?t you tell me
he used to beat your ass??
She said, ?but I love him without a doubt.?
And I said, ? but didn?t he knock your teeth out??
She said, ?but I love him ?til the day I die,
And I said, ? but didn?t he give you a black eye??
She said, ?but I love him. He makes my heart race.?
And I said, ? but didn?t he carve that scar across your face??
She said, ?but I love him. He makes me weak at the knees.?
And I said, ? but didn?t he give you that sexually transmitted disease??
She said, ?but I love him. This nigga is heaven sent!?
And I said, ? but didn?t he lock you out of your own apartment, where you pay the rent??
She said, ?but I love him, this aint no joke.?
And I said, ? but didn?t he pimp your 14 year-old daughter just to get some coke??
She said, ?but I love him. What are you stressing me for??
And I said, ? but didn?t he fracture your jaw??
She said, ?but I love him. What part don?t you understand??
And I said, ? but didn?t you catch him in bed with another man??
Then she said something stupid.
?But I love him.?
(may she rest in peace)

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