Alieux Casey
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Poem "Open":
- written April 2008
- published April 15, 2008
- viewed 182 times
Other poems by Alieux Casey:
»30 MPH«
»I haven't met you yet«
»The Best«
»The Effects of Him«
»The last thing (she said)«
»what it is«
Visit Alieux Casey's profile page
Poem "Open":
- written April 2008
- published April 15, 2008
- viewed 182 times
Other poems by Alieux Casey:
»Open«
by Alieux Casey
the first time
i saw you
the way was clear;
suddenly
my clouded noisy mind was silent
as if I had been worrying about
finding a key
to a compartment
I needed to get in
not knowing how
until I saw you /
all I need to do
was to grasp you,
to make sure
you were who I had been looking for.
and
how do I know that you are?
My mind has been silent ever since.
i saw you
the way was clear;
suddenly
my clouded noisy mind was silent
as if I had been worrying about
finding a key
to a compartment
I needed to get in
not knowing how
until I saw you /
all I need to do
was to grasp you,
to make sure
you were who I had been looking for.
and
how do I know that you are?
My mind has been silent ever since.
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