»BREATHING UNDER WATER«
(by Vusi Chris Venus Malala)
The one thing no human can stand
some of us just wish we could
it's somehow inhuman
Visualise the feeling of being able to.
The feeling of not seeing the one you love.
Feels like being in a vaccuum
Imagine the tension caused by the unseen gravity, yet still attached.
How far can you go to prove your love?
but still: will you be able to when they are no longer there?
Feels like breathing under water
Only those who have found genuine love knows what it is...
Just hoping that one day I will wake up to reality,
and that reality is you...
some of us just wish we could
it's somehow inhuman
Visualise the feeling of being able to.
The feeling of not seeing the one you love.
Feels like being in a vaccuum
Imagine the tension caused by the unseen gravity, yet still attached.
How far can you go to prove your love?
but still: will you be able to when they are no longer there?
Feels like breathing under water
Only those who have found genuine love knows what it is...
Just hoping that one day I will wake up to reality,
and that reality is you...
written in March 2008 : submitted on May 6, 2008 : viewed 231 times
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Miss pink: you must be a loving person
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