»A friendly crush«
(by Maviyo Nkosi)
28th January 2009 it was
There she was, quietly
Sitting on that chair
I thought to myself, Is
She an angel or what?
Skin so soft, body so hot
I glanced at her as if I had
Seen a ghost, my knees started
To shiver, my heart skipped
Emotions rose
Voice so smooth, lips so juicy
Points spot on, mind focused
Personality so mature
Steps so capturing
Breasts so sexy
I felt the temperature rise
I heard voices whispering
In my ears, whispering her name.
Took a look she wasn't there!!
I yearn!
There she was, quietly
Sitting on that chair
I thought to myself, Is
She an angel or what?
Skin so soft, body so hot
I glanced at her as if I had
Seen a ghost, my knees started
To shiver, my heart skipped
Emotions rose
Voice so smooth, lips so juicy
Points spot on, mind focused
Personality so mature
Steps so capturing
Breasts so sexy
I felt the temperature rise
I heard voices whispering
In my ears, whispering her name.
Took a look she wasn't there!!
I yearn!
written in January 2009 : submitted on March 16, 2009 : viewed 113 times
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Readers' comments
Rupert Ruel Nonyane: lovely write, very sweet. it was a friendly crush
Happy Mhlongo: At the last standza it seems lyk you were dreaming I had voices whispering, Took a look she wasn't there!!, but it shows that you are Mr Romantic, well done, dnt give up write some more
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