Comments on »Noah's Ark« by Hettie Van Zyl

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Mar 28, 2009:
• Tiema Muindi on »Noah's Ark« by Hettie Van Zyl:

  "your poem reminds me that the life that we have has a purpose and that we didnt come into existanc by chance."
  
Mar 25, 2009:
• Christopher Kudyahakudadirwe on »Noah's Ark« by Hettie Van Zyl:

  "I have read the poem 'Noah's Ark'. You expression is good and impressive, I must say. It makes one to remember that one of these days God's wrath is bound to put poured on all those who do not know him and bide by his rules. Sometimes the poem kind of sends chills into one's spine. I must also hasten to say that you must show the words spoken directly by a person either in quotation marks or in another manner that will show the difference between reported and direct speech.Also, again, I urge you to standardise you lines for uniformity and precision.Otherwise this is a good and message carrying poem especially to the Christian world. Keep on pushing the pen, sister!"