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Comments on »Songbird With A Broken Wing« by Andreas Buchholz

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    Mar 30, 2009:
  • John Paragreen on »Songbird With A Broken Wing« by Andreas Buchholz:
    "Hi Andreas, good title, for me I'd rework this and end each verse on your title, this would make it more song like,the drawing point here is (broken wing)yet it hardly gets a mentioned,wing is a great word to rhyme. I try to get the strongest lines to open with,these are great Magic lights that we can't keep, Tragic nights that make us weep. good luck,john"