Comments on »Flames« by Hettie Van Zyl

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Oct 28, 2009:
• Berto Kamp on »Flames« by Hettie Van Zyl:

  "I like how the flames prevent and cause the barrier between - good stuff"
  
Oct 14, 2009:
• mary on »Flames« by Hettie Van Zyl:

  "very poetic love the wording"
  
Oct 9, 2009:
• Christopher Kudyahakudadirwe on »Flames« by Hettie Van Zyl:

  "your poem is good and carries a lot of poetic devices that are very saucy and meaningful. However, I suggest that you edit your work to avoid some minor mistakes here and there. But, English being your second language you can always work to improve I know."