Comments on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall

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Jun 2, 2011:
• Gigi Yenk on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "Its often only in poetry that we let out pieces of ourselves captured in words, there for anyone to make of what they will"
  
Apr 15, 2011:
• Khanyie on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "This is a wonderful poem, so real and inspiring. I love it!!!!!"
  
Oct 20, 2010:
• Michelle Clark on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "Thank you for such great reading, well done!!!!!"
  
Jun 29, 2010:
• silindile on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "thank you for such wonderful poem, never fail to motivate us, you have a talent then use it before God take it away from you,"
  
Jan 4, 2010:
• Julian on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "A dark phase........."
  
Dec 18, 2009:
• Mervin on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "Ak, this is a good poem where the external natural storm cannot be compared to the intensity of the nervous energy within you."
  
Dec 14, 2009:
• Rani on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "Really love the style and use of language, very good in fact excellent"
  
Dec 2, 2009:
• Don on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "A good sonnet."
  
Nov 26, 2009:
• Bram on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "A lovely sonnet with deep spiritual meaning."
  
• Dion on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:

  "Thank you for such an inspirational piece of writing."
  
Patrick on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Fantastic poem"

Nov 19, 2009:
Khanyo on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"It is a poignant poem in which the external storm is a piercing, reflection of the storm within."

Nov 18, 2009:
Jeeven on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Very vivid!"

Sheila Nair on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Fantastic explosion of emotion. Well done !"

tersia on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"i enjoyed reading it."

Nov 17, 2009:
valentia on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Interesting,you can't stop reading till you reach the end and that's when you understand the content of the poem"

Nov 16, 2009:
Rhoda on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"The flashes of lightning really does resemble the flashes of thoughts that goes through our minds every minute of every day...some worse than a thunderstorm that never seems to go away. Fantastic analogy."

roshan on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"expressive language but still cannot explain the turmoil within."

Nov 15, 2009:
Tess on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Interesting"

Nov 14, 2009:
Eric on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Wonderful...and i cannot thank u enough for introducing me to this site"

peter on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"emotions indefinable lyk da lightning."

Tasveer on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"A interesting poem.....that throws the reader into ur mind...... the storm outside can not be compared to the storm within your mind....."

Logas on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"imagery interesting - helps the reader to understand the speaker."

jalapeno on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"the nervous energy of the lines expresses the tone of the poem."

csm on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"very expressive"

Nov 13, 2009:
Saneshen on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Once again, relates to every reader as we all have those moments yet never spoken off.Great one!"

Nov 12, 2009:
Akshar on »Within Without« by Ashok Kumar Madhunlall:
"Wonderful!!!!!!"