Comments on »One life One love One heart« by Heather Keogh
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- Christopher Kudyahakudadirwe on »One life One love One heart« by Heather Keogh:"While the subject of this poem is loaded with a message, the form is not standard. The lines are too long. They need to be trimmed and packed with detail.It must not read like prose."

Nov 18, 2008:
