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by Naif Taha, September 14, 2009

The moment I opened my heart and let you in
I saw this great love starting to begin.

I opened my eyes to a vision of you
I hope, I pray your feelings are true.

I have loved and I have paid the cost
And I have felt the pain of the love I lost.

But, now, I think I have truly found
An Angel who walks upon the ground.

You go beyond all limits for me
Just to show your love endlessly.

I could search my whole life through
And never find another 'you'.

You are so special that I wanted you to know
I truly, completely love you so.

Written: September 2009
Tags: Love

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Reader comments

"Are you still alive?"
Mina Salem, Jun 17, 2016
Liza, Mar 22, 2011
"Truly amazing, your love must be so special :)"
Sam, Mar 15, 2011
"This made me tear up! You have a beautiful heart and I think a true angle wouldn't deserve dat much love!
You are amazing"
cookies, Mar 15, 2011
"amazing, awesome, fantastic, wonderful. these are all small words to describe this poem..this poem goes beyond all those words cuz i dont think words describing how beautiful this poem is would exist ... i love it keep it up"
anonymous, Mar 13, 2011
"naiooof..its really amazing x]
love it"
nour, Sep 15, 2009
"how lovely xD
me likey :P"
Ibrahiim , Sep 15, 2009
"Im giving that to my love"
Mark Sonuwil, Sep 14, 2009
"Seriously Touchiing ! >."
Hanoona xD, Sep 14, 2009
"nano i love it
i kno u wrote fr me :P
its amazing"
sally , Sep 14, 2009
"You made me tear :'(
Love it"
Samar, Sep 14, 2009
"Ahhh honest loving words to melt the heart. Excellent"
Ryan Gordon Penn, Sep 14, 2009

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