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»Off to Exit«

by Loku Faglor, October 4, 2017

ooh dizzy
am getting sick
this stuff makes me fuse
not really tasty
so unlucky
it must not have been mine
there is my exit door

it is a pitty
I must be sorry
good bye is good lady
that was not real
it felt different
my eyes get sleepy
not sweet or colourful
only slot of these and that
there to the exit door
am off dear

Written: January 2012
Tags: Love

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"This is a good poem. Short but deep"
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